essay 5 clear
December 1st, 2009 by cpaliski can see myself being unclear in my first body paragraph and can be fixed by moving sentences around.
i can see myself being unclear in my first body paragraph and can be fixed by moving sentences around.
whats fustrating about essay 5 is getting all my thoughts in the right oplace.
the part of the writing process that is easier now then before the start of this class is the actual brainstorming and getting my thoughts on paper
essay 4 could have smoother transitions in my body paragraphs.
i could make my paper have smoother transitions by going from a topic and explaining the next idea introduce it to the next paragraph making it a smoother transition.
the best solution to pocketing tips is checking every valet before they lesave
”. My brother and I are both managers at locations, this “stealing-of-tips” is a problem, and this paper will discuss the problem and offer solutions.
In this essay what i took out of it was all the great counterarguements and examples of how this could boos education. so thats what i want in my writng. If i were the author i would come up with a more logical scenario because in this economy there is no way we can pay teachers more then they get now
being from California traffic is a major part of my life. the overpopulated cities and people everywhere is the story my life. i think i could solve thtat problem if people just wne the speed limit here would be no traffic. another way to solve it would be unpopulate populated areas.
im not really sure in my paper.