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I think that i have become more adept at beginning my essay like thesis and the introduction in Essay 4. I feel that it flows better and mixes better then it did before

In my essay i think that i could use smoother transitions when i start a new paragraph and new points

All of these are easy to fix solutions that are simple in their idea and even simpler to implement. These ideas are only a few strategies and ideas that could be used to solve the BGSU parking problem