– I didn’t notice this in your rough edit, but did you white balance your shots?
– Good movement of yoru camera as it follows the girls from shot to shot
– I would have liked to see more close-up shots. Don’t be afraid to get in peoples faces with the camera!
You do have a very solid storyline here. I would have liked to see something compelling for the closing, but beyond that an overall good job.
rogersc
March 23, 2009 @ 3:23 pm
Diana,
Here are my thoughts.
– I didn’t notice this in your rough edit, but did you white balance your shots?
– Good movement of yoru camera as it follows the girls from shot to shot
– I would have liked to see more close-up shots. Don’t be afraid to get in peoples faces with the camera!
You do have a very solid storyline here. I would have liked to see something compelling for the closing, but beyond that an overall good job.