The trend that interest me is the steady decline of Cleveland. Some reasons I believe this is the continuation of businesses moving out of Cleveland and businesses closing, making no efforts to bring money back into Cleveland, no renovations to make the city look better.
I think the most important reason is the businesses moving out of Cleveland or closing. I believe this is a cause to the other reasons.
my audience is the technical team at Bowling Green. I have talked about the major internet problems at Mcdonald hall. I could make it better by giving more examples.
I feel the strogest part of my essay is the audience because I believe the weak internet is a serious problem at Bowling Green. My weakest part of the essay is the organization because I believe that I just didn’t have enough info.
For essay 2 I will be talking about the weak internet connection in Mcdonald hall.
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I am writing about internet troubles in my dorm. At first I was writing with no problem, but then i got stuck and I am having trouble making it three pages.
I liked the final draft for the most part but if I had some more time I could have worked on the little things such as transitions
I have to rewrite my thesis to fit my main ideas and make a few ideas more clear for the reader
I really liked the peer review. It helped my paper a lot to get a second view on it and constuctive criticism always helps.
I choose to to the idea tree and it really helped organize all of my ideas
The Group I choose to use for our persusive essay is a Music group