connolm’s blog

I am writing about internet troubles in my dorm.  At first I was writing with no problem, but then i got stuck and I am having trouble making it three pages.

I liked the final draft for the most part but if I had some more time I could have worked on the little things such as transitions

I have to rewrite my thesis to fit my main ideas and make a few ideas more clear for the reader

I really liked the peer review.  It helped my paper a lot to get a second view on it and constuctive criticism always helps.

I choose to to the idea tree and it really helped organize all of my ideas

The Group I choose to use for our persusive essay is a Music group