October 6th, 2009 by connolm
The trend that interest me is the steady decline of Cleveland. Some reasons I believe this is the continuation of businesses moving out of Cleveland and businesses closing, making no efforts to bring money back into Cleveland, no renovations to make the city look better.
I think the most important reason is the businesses moving out of Cleveland or closing. I believe this is a cause to the other reasons.
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October 6th, 2009 by connolm
my audience is the technical team at Bowling Green. I have talked about the major internet problems at Mcdonald hall. I could make it better by giving more examples.
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October 6th, 2009 by connolm
I feel the strogest part of my essay is the audience because I believe the weak internet is a serious problem at Bowling Green. My weakest part of the essay is the organization because I believe that I just didn’t have enough info.
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October 6th, 2009 by connolm
For essay 2 I will be talking about the weak internet connection in Mcdonald hall.
http://www.collegerecruiter.com/weblog/2009/01/21_of_college_s.php.
<http://www.sciencedirect.com/science?_ob=ArticleURL&_udi=B6VDC-4BFXPD1-2&_user=7773962&_rdoc=1&_fmt=&_orig=search&_sort=d&_docanchor=&view=c&_searchStrId=1022057357.
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September 24th, 2009 by connolm
I am writing about internet troubles in my dorm. At first I was writing with no problem, but then i got stuck and I am having trouble making it three pages.
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September 24th, 2009 by connolm
I liked the final draft for the most part but if I had some more time I could have worked on the little things such as transitions
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September 10th, 2009 by connolm
I have to rewrite my thesis to fit my main ideas and make a few ideas more clear for the reader
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September 9th, 2009 by connolm
I really liked the peer review. It helped my paper a lot to get a second view on it and constuctive criticism always helps.
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September 7th, 2009 by connolm
I choose to to the idea tree and it really helped organize all of my ideas
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September 1st, 2009 by connolm
The Group I choose to use for our persusive essay is a Music group
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