Revision Plan for Essay #2

October 1, 2012

Although I did well on this paper, there were a few simple fixes that will improve the upcoming papers.

The main thing I need to work on is my work cited page. Learning the new format of MLA and implicating will make sure I pass my next paper without flaws.

Also the focus of my topic for Essay #2 was a bit off, but with this being a difficult and an extremely deep topic it should be an easy fix with less complicated subjects.

The last thing I tend to do is add extra info that doesn’t really connect to my topic. I have to either avoid doing that all together or find a way to connect it back to my thesis.

Entry Filed under: Uncategorized. Posted in  Uncategorized .

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *


Calendar

October 2012
M T W T F S S
1234567
891011121314
15161718192021
22232425262728
293031  

Most Recent Posts