Revision Plan for Essay #2
October 1, 2012
Although I did well on this paper, there were a few simple fixes that will improve the upcoming papers.
The main thing I need to work on is my work cited page. Learning the new format of MLA and implicating will make sure I pass my next paper without flaws.
Also the focus of my topic for Essay #2 was a bit off, but with this being a difficult and an extremely deep topic it should be an easy fix with less complicated subjects.
The last thing I tend to do is add extra info that doesn’t really connect to my topic. I have to either avoid doing that all together or find a way to connect it back to my thesis.
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