charvis’s blog

I learned how to change different words to make them sound better. I learned how I don’t always catch my mistakes. Helps me learn how make better topic sentences, or changes into my new paragraphs. I will now focus on revising the little mistakes i made and making my draft better.

For my pre-writing I used the GSW portfolio & made an organized list.

The topic for my paper is intramurals.

I would rather be able to fly because I would be able to get somewhere faster than driving.

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