Reflection
I think my writing has had a huge increase, I feel as though I can better support my details and come up with better thesis’s. I can see that I don’t focus so much on writing bologna to make a paper a certian length, I write to full express my ideas. I would like to improve on my focus for papers, sometimes I can get a little side tracked with my ideas.
Heather McIntyre Said,
October 8, 2009@ 9:31 am
I’m glad to see that you’re beginning to focus less on the ‘bologna,’ Chelsea. It can be easy to get sidetracked on issues like length and forget what you’re supposed to be working on. The more you organize essays and think about what type of support your audience needs, the more focused your essays should become.