Archive for September 4, 2009

9/4 Reader Response

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In my peer review I was told of a few things that would probably make my essay better.  I have taken these things into consideration and here are just a few things that I think that I should probably revise.  I would like to elevate my vocabulary, as Charity suggested, as well as make my […]