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Resume Feedback

After reading through the feedback provided from peer review and after reading some of your classmate’s resumes and cover letters, what specific steps are you going to make towards revision?  Consider both the direct feedback you received and also the feedback that you gave your classmates. 

In revision I need to add more of my skills and relevant experience for the position.  I got pretty consistent feedback on that so I think it’s safe to say that this needs worked on.  I also need to add the company name and be more specific why I want to work there.  I thought that that it was pretty good, but I am glad to have this feedback because I do intend on actually applying for this job.

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