Rhetorical Analysis Feedback
Think back to peer review on Wednesday and write a reflection about the feedback you received from your peers. Write about how you are or how you will use that feedback to revise your essay. Conclude your blog by making a list of three specific things you will complete in class today as you work to revise your essay.
I got some good feedback from my peer. There are some things I need and acknowledge I needed to work on because going into the review I knew what needed done and I made a list for myself. His review seemed to coincide with the list I made so it’s reassuring me that I am hopefully on the right track. The only thing I am still having trouble with is the image that is required. In class I want to put my works cited page together, clean up my thesis statement, and fill in some gaps that were pointed out to me in review.
March 29th, 2009 at 10:59 am
Do remember that you don’t have to have an image after all. We just didn’t have time to talk about including images so I took that requirement out.