On revision…What does it mean? How do you conduct revision? Revision to me is making something one has written better. As a writer you are close to the piece you are writing and know what you want to say and how it should sound. However, when writing it is easy to overlook errors for these […]
Think back to peer review on Wednesday and write a reflection about the feedback you received from your peers. Write about how you are or how you will use that feedback to revise your essay. Conclude your blog by making a list of three specific things you will complete in class today as you work […]
I am having trouble getting a good thesis statement finalized. I have most of my analysis done, but I want to finish it up by being able to tie it into a good thesis. I want to argue that I like this PSA and think that it is effective, but I can’t seem to […]
“Ovarian Cancer – Three “Women” Stand Up for Ovarian Cancer.” 13 December 2007. You Tube. Video. 10 February 2009 <http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NbWZa7Flmo4>. In text: (“Ovarian Cancer”) For the citation that will go on my works cited page there is a hanging indent, but the formating is off when I copy it into the blog.
I think that the Rhetorical analysis should be graded on the following: Creativity, relevance to the PSA, have the opinions of the author that are related to the subject, keep the reader’s attention, makes the reader want to finish reading, create awareness, author has to know what they are talking about, use rhetorical appeals, have […]
I want to use this PSA because it affects a six year old going through Ovarian cancer and this is enough for anyone to stop and listen. I have personal experience with the issue and feel that it is something that is not often heard of or addressed. I feel passionatly about the issue and […]
Both introductions tell us the topic and purpose of the analysis. The introduction sets the tone for the analysis and what is to follow in the rest of the piece. It use defines the audience and provides some credentials of the writer to the topic. When introducing their topic, both authors used specific evidence […]
The experiences I have had with portfolios were in my ENG 111 and 112 classes. My 111 instructor was a grad student and didn’t know what in the world she was doing. No one passed a paper in either first turn in or rewrite until the the final turn in of the third paper. […]
For this project many literacies were used. I had to write, draw, type, and use PowerPoint on the computer. It let me examine the ways other people may learn and be a little more sensitive to the fact that everyone learns a little differently and they will also have different literacies. This is […]
The experience with the PSA so far is good. All group members seem to be in the project to get the work done and take and equal part. Yesterday we got the foundation of the project done at my apartment and we also decided on how the remaining work is divided up so […]