a problem that is in the world around me would be all the pot holes that are on the roads.. and that the states should be fixing them so it doesnt ruin someones car

i am most proud of the topic…i am struggling with a lot of things… mainly having supporting evidence on the topic and citing it

Following the latest trends has become a big deal lately, and everyone wants to fit in. So a big trend that seems to be going stronger and stronger each year would be people who own north faces.

I think after reflecting on my writing that i have improved by not jumping from topic to topic and when i write my essays i include more detail.  I can see that my writing is slowly improving and should be at the spot i need it to be by the end of the semester.  i would like to improve in ares that include directing my audience.

a trend that interests me  woluld have to be ugg boots.  Many people out on campus have a pair and i think the leading cause of it would have to be because they are stylish  and are comfy, also they are warm to wear.  The main cause i think is that they are warm to wear when it is cold outside

my audience for essay two is the city council of bowling green. In my essay i have explained the issue and have tried to give enough evidence to explain my reasoning and position. To meet them better i could put more details and evidence to support my position and argument

my two sources that i am using are a website that talks about smoking laws and explains about how smoking in places is not allowed and the other source i am using is asking a friend certain questions about what they think about smoking (Read the rest of this story.)

This is one of my sources: http://www.ohionosmokelaw.gov/sflaw/sflaw1.aspx

And another source I want to use is to interview a few students on campus to get their opinion on what they think of students smoking to close to buildings.

The thing that i liked most about my final draft is that i got to include all my main ideas that i came up with.  And if i had more time to fix my essay then i would probably like to spend more time with organizing my ideas and making it all flow better.

when doing the peer review it helped me realize that i needed to make grammar changes and to take somethings out so my paper doesn’t repeat a lot… I hope to focus on just making my paper better