i feel that i have improved as a writer in so many ways.I am proud with all the progress that i have made.

i feel that i can now construct a better well written essay…That i can not site things better and develop a better supporting argument

moments in essay 5 that i see myself unclear is during my counter argument and that it doesnt make much sense. I am just going to try and make it make more sense and flow easier

what is most frustrating about essay 5 is that i want it to flow easily and its not doing that and i feel that it is not organized well enough

i like that the book is easy to read and follow what i dislike is that its not long enough, they should include more common animals. And yes i think it should win a newberrry award

THe part that seems to be an easier writing process would be making the essay flow

For my counter argument

My most effective solution for this problem would be to ban cell phones all together while driving. Yes i did with as much detail and support as i could.

People who drive while talking on their cell phones is a bad thing, the best solution to this would be to ban cell phones or to ticket people who use them while driving. My best solution would have to be to ban all usage of cell phones while operating a vehicle

After having our group plan of the zombie’s i think that it would convince people to follow it, it makes sense to go to Alaska to escape the US