grown as a writer
Posted on December 10th, 2009 at 11:21 am by aistolz and
i feel that i have improved as a writer in so many ways.I am proud with all the progress that i have made.
Improved since beginning
Posted on December 10th, 2009 at 11:21 am by aistolz and
i feel that i can now construct a better well written essay…That i can not site things better and develop a better supporting argument
Moments in essay 5
Posted on December 2nd, 2009 at 12:15 pm by aistolz and
moments in essay 5 that i see myself unclear is during my counter argument and that it doesnt make much sense. I am just going to try and make it make more sense and flow easier
Frustrating about essay 5
Posted on December 2nd, 2009 at 12:14 pm by aistolz and
what is most frustrating about essay 5 is that i want it to flow easily and its not doing that and i feel that it is not organized well enough
Chilrens book likes//dislikes
Posted on December 2nd, 2009 at 12:13 pm by aistolz and
i like that the book is easy to read and follow what i dislike is that its not long enough, they should include more common animals. And yes i think it should win a newberrry award