This is one of my sources: http://www.ohionosmokelaw.gov/sflaw/sflaw1.aspx And another source I want to use is to interview a few students on campus to get their opinion on what they think of students smoking to close to buildings.

The thing that i liked most about my final draft is that i got to include all my main ideas that i came up with.  And if i had more time to fix my essay then i would probably like to spend more time with organizing my ideas and making it all flow better.

when doing the peer review it helped me realize that i needed to make grammar changes and to take somethings out so my paper doesn’t repeat a lot… I hope to focus on just making my paper better

for the prewriting strategies  i used the one in the writing portfolio and the list all the main ideas…Using these made it easier for me to realize what i wanted to include in my paper

i would fly because it would be easier to get to class!!!