Look at the 5 categories on GSW’s rubric for grading essays (found in your Portfolio). In which category do you feel the strongest? The weakest?
I would say that my strongest category would be the audience because I know how to firmly grasp the attentions of the readers. To me that portion is the easiest and I can use supporting sentences to grab every reader.
My weakest point is organization, which I learned from the last essay, because some of my sentences become jumbled and I don’t notice it. I need to carefully revise this essay and make sure that my thoughts are straight.
3:23 pm - 10-5-2009
You’re making progress with the organization.