Archive for December, 2009
What Part of the writing process is easier now than it was in Essays 1, 2, and 3? Why?
I think that the whole writing process has become easier for me throughout the class. I’ve always had problems writing papers because I’ve always felt that gathering the information became confusing throughout my writing. I have learned a better way to word my papers and I have also become a better editor.
Where could your essay use smoother transitions?
My essay needed smoother transitions throughout the paragraphs – but also the beginning of each paragraph. The topic sentences were a little shaky before I went back and edited the information. My biggest problem has been transitions but I went back and fixed them in the beginning of every paragraph in order to make the paper fully understandable.
What is your thesis for Essay 4? (Make sure to include which solution is the BEST one in your thesis).
I believe that in order to decrease the number of students that are getting infected with H1N1 virus, Bowling Green State University should first and foremost require all students to receive the H1N1 vaccine but also have students go to the health center for a mandatory check-up and quarantine those who are infected somewhere other than the dorms.