I feel that I have grown a lot as a writer over the course ofthe semester. My essay one and my essay five are total opposites! I am very happy with my progress! Mainly because I now know that I am getting better at writing!
I have improved in developement.
I have noticed that from the first essay to the third essay my developement was a little on the down side, but in essay five it had improved a lot!
In my whole essay so far, I start out only giving my ideas and then when i sit down to “revise” it I truly write it because I go through and expand on all of it!
Essay five frustrates me because it’s essay five and in a way I feel I haven’t improved, yet getting my papers back i clearly have.
I read my book and i thouroughly enjoyed it. I will definitely be reading this book to my children down the road.
It taught that prejudism was wrong, and I agree! It also had very cute pictures!
There really isn’t anything i didn’t like about it.
I think it should win!
Now compared to essay 1, 2 and 3 I find that it is easier in the writing process to revise my papers. Pre-writing and rough drafting still can be difficult, but when it’s time to finish a paper I have found it is getting easier!
In the first paragraph I could use better transitions!
Doctor’s visits once evey sixs months!
I tried, but I will be doing a better job at this when i revise my paper!
Anorexia/bulimia needs to be solved because it is unhealthy, very dangerous, and becoming a bigger problem everyday.
I want to write more like this essay because I feel that my counterarguments aren’t th greatest and his are.
Making it more clear to everyone about the differences from old teachers to new ones.