Original Paragraph: Although the addition of a sink to every dorm room located in Bowling Green, Ohio would result in numerous benefits and positive outcomes for all students, there are a few drawbacks to this installment.  Obviously, like all other installments, equipping thousands of rooms with an all-purpose sink would cost an extremely large amount […]



Reworked Paragraph (both the original and revised)
Wednesday September 02nd 2009, 7:25 pm
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Original: Growing up with my grandmother by my side has influenced my life in more ways than I could ever put into words.  So many of the qualities that I possess and the values that I pride myself on are a direct result from the life that my grandmother chose to live. There will never […]