I truly belive I have grown as a writer. After reading my first essay I’ve realized that I am now able to have more complete thoughts and support those thoughts with solid resources. I am able to oragnize my essays a lot better, and use better forms of grammar ect.
I just, overall, think I’ve become a stronger writer all together. I know some things aren’t fully there yet, but those are the things that have already gotten better since the first week of school. Evaluators will be able to notice these changes just from the value of my work. My detailed support has gotten better, transistions are becoming better, and mechanics are gradually improving.
I can see myself being vague in the paragraph where I’m talking about the plot. I’m not entirely sure how to support my plot paragraph. I intend to just continue brainstorming, and working with the paragraph.
What’s most frustrating about essay 5 is not really knowing how to write it. I really didn’t know how to get started so it was difficult to write. Because I didn’t know how to start it, I found it hard to be able to actually write the paper.
I really enjoy the story my book has, and the size and color of the pictures. It really seems like a high quality book, and I think it should win the Newberry Award.
I believe writing essay 4 was much easier because I have a stronger grip on the writing process. I am able to provide more supporting details, and my mechanics are becoming much better.
I believe that I could user smoother transitions throughout my entire paper. I don’t feel many of my paragrpahs flow well together.
I think my most effective solution is using alternative fuel. It is the most well-known today, and probably to most convenient to accomplish.
As citizens of the world, we should all act as one and change the way we are living by using alternatives to our everyday lives to help promote a better future.
I liked how the author’s essay was organized. I don’t feel like my essay is very organized. I also don’t think my thoughts are completely wrote out.
I think the author should some how make it more exciting, I was kind of bored reading the essay.