I found this article to be quite extreme. It seemed to only discuss obedience on levels that are of high authority and really none of a lower, less significant manner. I also think that adding religious stories such as Adam and Eve or the Greek Myths can be somewhat misleading because they can be interpreted in many different ways.
Overall, I think it was strong but needed some less extreme examples and also the removal of a few unnecessary paragraphs such as paragraph 5 on spiritual development.